2007年10月24日 星期三
reading report
I slept in Squirrel’s room yesterday because Chezzie, Jamie, Squirrel and me needed to discuss our reading report. Both Chezzie and Squirrel needed to have part time jobs, so we had to discuss after they came back to the dorm. We decided to make a report about IKEA. After finishing our discussion, it was 01:00 already. I still used Squirrel’s computer to find some interesting IKEA’s commercials. Most of IKEA’s commercials were related to sexual plots. I felt shy when I was watching those videos. However, it was so funny and easy to let me understand what the commercials were talking about. I hope we can prepare a good report for the class in these days.
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You should have said "Both Chezzie and Squirrel have part time jobs and had to work last night,".
I watched a couple of those commercials on YouTube, and I have to say that I had no idea what they were "talking about". I think you need to let us all know what they were talking about. I could see the humor in some of them, but I didn't find them very good commercials. I had no idea what they were selling. I see that some people think that Ikea is selling homosexuality and they're upset enough about it not to buy whatever it is that Ikea sells. Furniture, right?
Other people were thrilled with the political message of the gay Ikea commercials, I wasn't impressed by anything but the toddler who found a vibrator, turned it on, and then laughed because he enjoyed the good, good, good vibrations. That was genuine. All the rest were play-acting.
So what are you going to talk about in your report? And how do videos of furniture commercials fit into a reading report? These are interesting questions.
I'm afraid that your post is a bit incoherent and disorganized. But the writing isn't bad sentence by sentence. It just doesn't hold together as a unit.
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